The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the transformation of public libraries in the current condition and 20 years ago.
Overall
, it is evident that there are some adjustments for the position
due to
more facilities added
such
as self-service machines and a café. In terms of the hallway, tables and chairs are removed to the children’s section and become two sofas. The computer
room
that had been used twenty years ago, moving to the first
room
on the left from the entrance.
Moreover
, all reference
books
located in those rooms
replaces
Change the verb form
replace
show examples
the adult fiction
books
. Regarding the east area, the enquiry desk transformed into self-service machines and an information desk in the centre of the area.
Additionally
, the central library no longer has adult non-fiction
books
. There is a café on the right side of the gate.
Lastly
, the
room
that had been used for children’s
books
already become a lecture
room
at the northwest central library.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words room, books with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • floor plan
  • public library
  • layout
  • reading area
  • computer station
  • multimedia section
  • children's area
  • reference section
  • study cubicles
  • shelving units
  • digital media
  • technological advancements
  • user behavior
  • accessibility
  • traffic flow
  • modernization
  • community needs
  • conversion
  • allocation
  • removal
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