The charts gives information about the rate of electrical using for different purposes and how much time spent by the owner of houses in the year 1920 to 2019 in a country.
The illustrated line diagram depicts a comparison of the use of household appliances in percentages between 1920 and 2019.
Overall
, the data represents the comparison between three appliances: washing
machine, refrigerator, and vacuum cleaner, all of which show a significant rise in usage over the years.
Upon closer examination, the use of washing machines shows a gradual rise from around 40% in 1920 to over 70% by 1960. Correct article usage
a washing
However
, there was a slight decline until 1980, where
it dropped to just above 60%. From 1980 to 2019, it steadily climbed again, peaking at above 70%. Correct word choice
when
In contrast
, the use of refrigerators demonstrates a rapid increase, starting from less than 10% in 1920 and reaching nearly 100% by 2019. The vacuum cleaner displayed a similar pattern, with a steady rise from around 30% in 1920 to almost 100% by 2019Submitted by nick
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