The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy ni 20 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts illustrate the age proportion of Yemen and Italy between 2000 and prediction for 2050.
Overall
, teenager to mature group becomes the largest proportion in the two contries
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countries
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for Italy, it is dominated by elderly people
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Looking at the information in more detail, Yemen will have slightly more than a
half citizens by 2050. Correct article usage
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In contrast
, the population of children will decrease from 50.1% in 2000 to 37.0% in 2050. For elderly people
, the projections show that there will increase around 2% from only 3.6% in 2000 to around 5.7% in 50 years later.
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