The bar chart below illustrates five different industries' percentage share of Country B's economy in 2005 and 2015 with a forecast for 2025. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The bar chart below illustrates five different industries' percentage share of Country B's economy in 2005 and 2015 with a forecast for 2025. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The chart below shows us five proportions of industries as a percentage of Country B’s trade

sector

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between 2005 and 2015 with a prediction for 2025. Generally speaking, the bar chart shows that some industries as finance will significantly grow,

while

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manufacturing

by contrast

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illustrates a dramatic decline and the other sectors will develop sustainably. Finance shows an upward trend with 30 per

cent

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in 2005 and its increase to 40 per

cent

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by the year 2025.

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, the finance

sector

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shows its higher point in the economy with a 5 per

cent

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increase every five years. Moving on to manufacturing, which has a dramatic decline over the given period. The percentage of

this

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industry will hit the lowest point of 5 per

cent

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by 2025 in Country B´s economy. The food processing and fossil fuels

sector

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fluctuates over a 20-year period. It is striking, that the food

sector

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despite the rise in 2015 will be halved up to 10 per

cent

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by 2025. There was a negligible rise in oil, coal and gas industries in 2015 and in 10 years the percentage will flatten up to its numbers in 2005.

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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 4 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "dramatic" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

191 words

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