The bar chart below illustrates five different industries' percentage share of Country B's economy in 2005 and 2015 with a forecast for 2025. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The bar chart below illustrates five different industries' percentage share of Country B's economy in 2005 and 2015 with a forecast for 2025.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 

Write at least 150 words.
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The chart below shows us five proportions of industries as a percentage of Country B’s trade
sector
between 2005 and 2015 with a prediction for 2025. Generally speaking, the bar chart shows that some industries as finance will significantly grow,
while
manufacturing
by contrast
illustrates a dramatic decline and the other sectors will develop sustainably. Finance shows an upward trend with 30 per
cent
in 2005 and its increase to 40 per
cent
by the year 2025.
Overall
, the finance
sector
shows its higher point in the economy with a 5 per
cent
increase every five years. Moving on to manufacturing, which has a dramatic decline over the given period. The percentage of
this
industry will hit the lowest point of 5 per
cent
by 2025 in Country B´s economy. The food processing and fossil fuels
sector
fluctuates over a 20-year period. It is striking, that the food
sector
despite the rise in 2015 will be halved up to 10 per
cent
by 2025. There was a negligible rise in oil, coal and gas industries in 2015 and in 10 years the percentage will flatten up to its numbers in 2005.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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