The diagram below shows the process of milk production.

The diagram illustrates how

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is produced.

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, the procedure involves six stages, starting from milking in the first step and culminating in displaying on the shelf in supermarkets and shops in the

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step.

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with, the cows, which grazed from the land, are milked by the milking machine twice

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a day and

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is stored in a refrigerator.

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, refrigerated

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is delivered to the Dairy by

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tankers every day. The

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is

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sorted by its purpose, which is either for

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or for cheese, cream and butter. All

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dairy foods except

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are produced immediately,

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the

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needs to take another stage to be pasteurised and packaged. After all dairy products are made, they are displayed and sold in supermarkets and shops. In summary, the procedure of

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production appears to be systematic and efficient, consisting of two different methods which are separated with the purpose of products