The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

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The diagram depicts the floor design of a library today and two decades ago with specific details.

Overall

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, we can observe that there have been

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of changes and relocations over the period of 20 years. Mainly in the central part of the floor where there are no longer tables and chairs. We can

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notice that the only thing which stayed the same

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the location of the entrance door.

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, the section of children’s

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which was in the right-hand corner of the north, is replaced by the lecture room. You now are able to find children’s fiction

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in front of the place that they used to be in the left-hand corner which is developed more by adding a couple of sofas.

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, storytelling events are held there too.

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was the former place for CDs and computer games, which no longer exist.

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now there is a computer room next to the entrance to the left which in the past was considered as a reading space.

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, now there are adult fiction

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in the former position of non-fiction

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. Right after that, you can find the information desk.

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now there are some self-service machines available just near the café which was the place for enquiry desk before.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

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4 paragraphs

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