The table shows the result of a survey by a magazine about what kind of articles people of different age groups like to read. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table shows the outcome published by a magazine of a survey for
range
of Add an article
a range
age
groups who like to read about a variety of articles
such
as,
Trending Remove the comma
apply
topics
, lifestyle, travel
and entertainment. The number
of peoples are listed in thousands.
Overall
, the individuals from the first two age
groups (16-25 and 26-35) like to read more about the
trending Correct article usage
apply
topics
and travel
related article
, Fix the agreement mistake
articles
while
people from age
groups of
36-45 and 46-55 are more involved in magazine Change preposition
apply
articles
about lifestyle and entertainment.
In the age
group
of 16-25, around 52,000 of
youngsters and adults read about Change preposition
apply
the
trending Correct article usage
apply
topics
, also
the same group
is likely to be interested in travel
also
, as there are around 51,000 of
individuals who like to read out Change preposition
apply
articles
related to travel
information. The
similar Correct article usage
A
number
of readers are in the 26-35 age
group
, where around 51,000 of them like to read about the
trending Correct article usage
apply
topics
and other
50,000 are interested in Correct article usage
the other
travel
.
The information of people ranging between the age
of 36-45 are
seen Change the verb form
is
more
interested in DIY, with around 40,000 readers marking the highest Change preposition
as more
number
in this
particular topic. The lowest number
of readers who are less interested in articles
about trending topics
and travel
are from the group
of peoples
whose Fix the agreement mistake
people
age
is
range is 34-45 and 46-55.Unnecessary verb
apply
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words age, articles, topics, travel, number, group with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.
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