The table shows the result of a survey by a magazine about what kind of articles people of different age groups like to read. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows the result of a survey by a magazine about what kind of articles people of different age groups like to read.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table shows the outcome published by a magazine of a survey for
range
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a range
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of
age
groups who like to read about a variety of
articles
such
as
,
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apply
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Trending
topics
, lifestyle,
travel
and entertainment. The
number
of peoples are listed in thousands.
Overall
, the individuals from the first two
age
groups (16-25 and 26-35) like to read more about
the
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trending
topics
and
travel
related
article
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articles
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,
while
people from
age
groups
of
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36-45 and 46-55 are more involved in magazine
articles
about lifestyle and entertainment. In the
age
group
of 16-25, around 52,000
of
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youngsters and adults read about
the
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trending
topics
,
also
the same
group
is likely to be interested in
travel
also
, as there are around 51,000
of
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individuals who like to read out
articles
related to
travel
information.
The
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A
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similar
number
of readers are in the 26-35
age
group
, where around 51,000 of them like to read about
the
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apply
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trending
topics
and
other
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the other
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50,000 are interested in
travel
. The information of people ranging between the
age
of 36-45
are
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is
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seen
more
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as more
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interested in DIY, with around 40,000 readers marking the highest
number
in
this
particular topic. The lowest
number
of readers who are less interested in
articles
about trending
topics
and
travel
are from the
group
of
peoples
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people
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whose
age
is
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range is 34-45 and 46-55.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words age, articles, topics, travel, number, group with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.

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