The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy ni 20 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen

and Italy ni 20 and projections for 2050.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and

make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts demonstrate the population ages of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and the prediction for 2050. 
Overall
, Almost the majority of the
populations
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population
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in both countries
are
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between 15 to 59
years
old in
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the year
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year
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years
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2000 and
in
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2050. In Yemen, it was illustrated that half of the population
were
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in the range of 0 to 14
years
old, but in 2050, it's expected to decline to 37%.
On the other hand
, the group of 15 to 59
years
old are projected to incline from 46.3% to 57.3%. For people who are 60
years
old and above, it is claimed to elevate
also
from 3.6% to 5.7%. For Italy, Most of the population in 2000
were
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in
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the ages of 15 to 59
years
old and
it
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is expected to
be decrease
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from 61.6% to 46.2%. For the ages of 0 to 14
years
old, it is expected to decline
about
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2.8%.
However
, the only group
that is
estimated to
be increased
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is the age group of 60
years
old and above, it is expected to increase from 24.1% to 42.3%.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • population distribution
  • age group
  • young population
  • mature population
  • aging society
  • demographic shift
  • proportion
  • dominant
  • balanced distribution
  • projected increase
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