The chart below shows what anthroplogy graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in the work after five years.

The chart below shows what anthroplogy graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in the work after five years.
The
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pie chart indicates comprehensive information regarding the employment pattern of the graduates in anthropology,
along with
a bar chart illustrating
the
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average income
of
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after 5 years. From an
overall
perspective, it is starkly apparent that more than half of the graduates chose to have a full-time career,
while
one-sixth of them followed part-time jobs almost twofold of the numbers who decided to pursue their education and had not known professional pursuits (8%). 12% of graduates remained unemployed 5 years after graduation and a minority of them (5%) had a part-time job
along with
postgrad study. As regards the table, it can be discerned the majority of those who were working in the government sector earned more than 100,000$,
while
this
amount diminished for Freelance consultants.
However
, the lowest income was for those who were working in the private
sectors
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. Just almost one-third of the private employees received more than 100,000$ with 40% of consultants.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • undergraduate degree
  • anthropology graduates
  • career paths
  • further education
  • full-time employment
  • part-time work
  • self-employment
  • postgraduate studies
  • salary progression
  • salary growth
  • government sector
  • private sector
  • non-profit organizations
  • demand for anthropologists
  • sector-specific skills
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