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The chart below gives information about the purpose of visits to five cities in the uk in 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about the purpose of visits to five cities in the uk in 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the reasons
of
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for
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 visiting London,
Edinburgh
,
Mandester
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Manchester
,
Birminghem
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Birmingham
 and Liverpool in
Uk
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UK
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 cities in the period of 2013
by
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in
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 4 categories holiday,
business
, visiting friends or relatives and others. In general, people who visited
Edinburgh
 were most for the
purpoes
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purposes
purpose
 of
holidy
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holiday
on the other hand
, the number of people who visited
Birmighem
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Birmingham
 for
business
 were more than London,
Edinbrgh
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Edinburgh
, Manchester and
liver pool
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Liver Pool
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. As we can see,
Eninburgh
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Edinburgh
 had around 68% of
vsitors
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visitors
 arriving for holiday, which was about three
times
 higher than the portion of visiting friends or relates. Meanwhile,
miscellaneus
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miscellaneous
 was five
times
 lower. than the 10% of
business
.
Moreover
,
business
 and visiting friends and relatives had
appoximately
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approximately
 8% of düfference in between.
Overall
,
Burmingham
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Birmingham
 had the lowest visitors
in
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 holiday, which was three
times
 lower the
Edinburgh
 and a third of London,
while
 Birmingham held the highest in
business
,
in other words
,
fire
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five
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times
 higher than the lowest of 10% for
Edinburgh
, Liver pool had the same portion of
business
 and
miscellineous
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miscellaneous
.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words edinburgh, business, times with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • visitor trends
  • purpose of visit
  • business trips
  • holiday destinations
  • visiting friends and relatives
  • comparative analysis
  • discernible patterns
  • infrastructure
  • tourism appeal
  • statistical data
  • urban attractiveness
  • visitor demographics
  • tourist inflow
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