The diagram below shows how the orange juice is produced

The diagram below shows how the orange juice is produced
The given picture displays the stages
in
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of
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an orange
juice
manufacturing procedure.
Overall
, there are two small processes in
this
procedure. Starting from collecting oranges at the
factory
, and concluding with fresh
juice
delivered to shops or being sent to another
factory
to be canned, the waste solid is used for making animal feed. In the first small process, fresh oranges are collected and transported to a
factory
to be washed, the oranges are
then
extracted by a machine,
while
the fresh
juice
is either packaged and sent to market or taken away for another manufacturing procedure, the waste solid is used to produce feed for animals. Regarding the second process, starting with the fresh
juice
and ending with the finished orange
juice
delivered to shops, fresh
juice
is
firstly
transported by a refrigerator truck to a system for water evaporating, the concentrated
juice
is
then
canned and carried by a truck to a warehouse to make it convenient to store.
Next,
the canned
juice
will be sent to a
factory
and water will be added at a certain rate depending on a formula before
finally
being packaged and delivered to shops.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words juice, factory with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Orchard
  • Harvest
  • Processing facility
  • Quality control
  • Extraction
  • Pasteurization
  • Filtration
  • Preservatives
  • Fortification
  • Deaeration
  • Shelf life
  • Distribution
  • Bottling
  • Packaging
  • Labeling
  • Environmental impact
  • Sustainability
  • Waste management
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