The diagram below shows how the orange juice is produced

The diagram below shows how the orange juice is produced
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The given picture displays the stages
in
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an orange
juice
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manufacturing procedure.
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, there are two small processes in
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procedure. Starting from collecting oranges at the
factory
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, and concluding with fresh
juice
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delivered to shops or being sent to another
factory
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to be canned, the waste solid is used for making animal feed. In the first small process, fresh oranges are collected and transported to a
factory
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to be washed, the oranges are
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extracted by a machine,
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the fresh
juice
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is either packaged and sent to market or taken away for another manufacturing procedure, the waste solid is used to produce feed for animals. Regarding the second process, starting with the fresh
juice
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and ending with the finished orange
juice
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delivered to shops, fresh
juice
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is
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transported by a refrigerator truck to a system for water evaporating, the concentrated
juice
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is
then
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canned and carried by a truck to a warehouse to make it convenient to store.
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the canned
juice
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will be sent to a
factory
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and water will be added at a certain rate depending on a formula before
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being packaged and delivered to shops.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words juice, factory with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Orchard
  • Harvest
  • Processing facility
  • Quality control
  • Extraction
  • Pasteurization
  • Filtration
  • Preservatives
  • Fortification
  • Deaeration
  • Shelf life
  • Distribution
  • Bottling
  • Packaging
  • Labeling
  • Environmental impact
  • Sustainability
  • Waste management
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