The diagrams below show the present building of a college and the plan for changes to the college site in the future. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram

illustrate

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a college building now and the future changes of its site.

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, the most obvious change is removing the footpath and the garden, which gave the

area

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apply

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extra space to expand and add more facilities and utilities. In the present, there is a footpath that

connect

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the Car Park, the classes, and the garden together. The

enterance

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entrance

of the building is located in front of the

gareden

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garden

and the toilet is on the other side of it. The number of classes is less than in the future plan. In 2020, the footpath and the garden are expected to be removed. The

area

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will

then

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be larger giving it more space to make more classrooms and

parkings

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parking

. The

enterance

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entrance

allocted

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located

allocated

anterior to the Bus Stop. The reception will change from having

it's

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own chamber to a desk in between the classes. The toilet is removed to the opposite side.

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, A new

area

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will open which is the shop, which was previously the lunch

area

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, the lunch

area

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will be beside the shop.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.

Vocabulary: Replace the words area with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

178 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

architecture
renovation
infrastructure
facade
landscaping
expansion
amenities
accessibility
pedestrian
vehicular traffic
demolition
construction
recreational areas
commons
atrium
courtyard
upgrade
sustainability
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egress
blueprint
survey
layout
zoning
modernization
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