The table shows the average number of vehicles per hour on two roads during the week. The pie charts show the proportion of different types of transportation using each road.

The table shows the average number of vehicles per hour on two roads during the week. The pie charts show the proportion of different types of transportation using each road.
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The charts above give information about the
cars
using the road for different purposes during the week
while
the pie graph gives information about different types of
cars
which are using the road.
Overall
, people are using
cars
majorly for their businesses and to commute to work and the rest of the people are using them for other activities
such
as shopping, leisure activities and taking children to school.
Furthermore
, 55% of the vehicles are used by people in order to commute to work, 15% for shopping, 15% for leisure, 40% for taking youngsters to school and 45 per cent for business.
However
, Roads are being used by different types of machines.
In addition
, the most common type is the car which uses 45% of the roads. LRT is using 35%. 10% is used by buses and taxis are
also
using 10 per cent.The maximum proportion of total roads is consumed by
cars
and LRT (Light Rail Transits).
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