The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
The following chart illustrates the preference of people for
coffee
and tea in five different cities
of
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Australia. It is possible to state that a large proportion of people decide to go to café for tea and
coffee
in four metropoles
such
as
Sydney
, Melbourne, Brisbane and Hobart except Adelaide.
It is clear that
in
Sydney
, Melbourne and Hobart residents importantly prefer to go to café for tea and
coffee
above 60% only in Adelaide it is rated with second place just below
the
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50%. Buying fresh
coffee
is not popular among the population
with
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all the towns
hence
the highest indication is 44% in
Sydney
and the lowest is in Brisbane just below 35 %. Purchasing instant
coffee
is
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second
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place among the hobbies of citizens of five urban
area
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. It is substantially popular in Hobart with
the
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proportion
54
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of 54
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in
while
in
Sydney
it is the least welcomed by people with 46 %.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, sydney with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just below" was used 2 times.

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