The chart below shows information about subway systems in three major European cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main information and making comparisons.

The chart below shows information about subway systems in three major European cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main information and making comparisons.
The table demonstrates data for the subway systems in London,
Paris
, and
Moscow
.
Overall
, it shows that London has the longest
track
out of the three cities. For
Paris
, it has the highest
number
of
stations
compared to the other two cities.
Additionally
, the highest daily passenger
number
is for
Moscow
. Starting with London Underground, the total
track
length is 408km which is more than the
Paris
Metro
by 194
km
and higher than
Moscow
metro
by 108
km
. The amount of
stations
in operation is 275 which makes it in second place after the
Paris
Metro
. For the
number
of travelers daily it is about 3 million. For
Paris
Metro
, It has the shortest total
track
length which is 214
km
. There are 300
stations
on duty and there are about 4.5 million passengers a day.
Lastly
Moscow
Metro
,
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has the second longest
track
which is about 300
km
and
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lowest amount of working
stations
.
However
, the
number
of people that use it is 6.5 million.
This
makes it have the most visitors out of the three places.
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