The chart below shows information about subway systems in three major European cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main information and making comparisons.
The table demonstrates data for the subway systems in London,
Paris
, and Moscow
.
Overall
, it shows that London has the longest track
out of the three cities. For Paris
, it has the highest number
of stations
compared to the other two cities. Additionally
, the highest daily passenger number
is for Moscow
.
Starting with London Underground, the total track
length is 408km which is more than the Paris
Metro
by 194 km
and higher than Moscow
metro
by 108 km
. The amount of stations
in operation is 275 which makes it in second place after the Paris
Metro
. For the number
of travelers daily it is about 3 million.
For Paris
Metro
, It has the shortest total track
length which is 214 km
. There are 300 stations
on duty and there are about 4.5 million passengers a day. Lastly
Moscow
Metro
,
has the second longest Remove the comma
apply
track
which is about 300 km
and the
lowest amount of working Add a missing verb
has the
stations
. However
, the number
of people that use it is 6.5 million. This
makes it have the most visitors out of the three places.Submitted by amanihejji on
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