The chart below shows information about subway systems in three major European cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main information and making comparisons.
The table demonstrates data for the subway systems in London,
Paris
, and Use synonyms
Moscow
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Overall
, it shows that London has the longest Linking Words
track
out of the three cities. For Use synonyms
Paris
, it has the highest Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
stations
compared to the other two cities. Use synonyms
Additionally
, the highest daily passenger Linking Words
number
is for Use synonyms
Moscow
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Starting with London Underground, the total Use synonyms
track
length is 408km which is more than the Use synonyms
Paris
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Metro
by 194 Use synonyms
km
and higher than Use synonyms
Moscow
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metro
by 108 Use synonyms
km
. The amount of Use synonyms
stations
in operation is 275 which makes it in second place after the Use synonyms
Paris
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Metro
. For the Use synonyms
number
of travelers daily it is about 3 million.
For Use synonyms
Paris
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Metro
, It has the shortest total Use synonyms
track
length which is 214 Use synonyms
km
. There are 300 Use synonyms
stations
on duty and there are about 4.5 million passengers a day. Use synonyms
Lastly
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Moscow
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Metro
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,
has the second longest Remove the comma
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track
which is about 300 Use synonyms
km
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the
lowest amount of working Add a missing verb
has the
stations
. Use synonyms
However
, the Linking Words
number
of people that use it is 6.5 million. Use synonyms
This
makes it have the most visitors out of the three places.Linking Words
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