The chart below shows information about subway systems in three major European cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main information and making comparisons.

The chart below shows information about subway systems in three major European cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main information and making comparisons.
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The table demonstrates data for the subway systems in London,
Paris
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, and
Moscow
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.
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, it shows that London has the longest
track
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out of the three cities. For
Paris
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, it has the highest
number
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of
stations
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compared to the other two cities.
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, the highest daily passenger
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is for
Moscow
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. Starting with London Underground, the total
track
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length is 408km which is more than the
Paris
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Metro
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by 194
km
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and higher than
Moscow
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metro
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by 108
km
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. The amount of
stations
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in operation is 275 which makes it in second place after the
Paris
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Metro
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. For the
number
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of travelers daily it is about 3 million. For
Paris
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Metro
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, It has the shortest total
track
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length which is 214
km
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. There are 300
stations
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on duty and there are about 4.5 million passengers a day.
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Moscow
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Metro
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,
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has the second longest
track
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which is about 300
km
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and
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lowest amount of working
stations
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.
However
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, the
number
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of people that use it is 6.5 million.
This
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makes it have the most visitors out of the three places.
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