The given two pie charts display the results of a survey into the popularity of various leisure activities with European adults in 1985 and 1995.

The given two pie charts display the results of a survey into the popularity of various leisure activities with European adults in 1985 and 1995.
The pie charts compare the outcomes of a survey conducted on the prevalence of different kinds of spare-time pursuits among adults in Europe in the years 1985 and 1995.
Overall
, what stands out from the charts is that watching TV accounted for the highest percentage of free-time activity in both mentioned years,
while
the category 'other, constituted the lowest
figure
. In 1985, the most popular activity was watching TV, representing 32% of the total leisure amusement,
while
in 1995,
this
figure
decreased to just almost one-third of the total. In 1985, talking with family constituted roughly one-fifth of adults' hobbies,
however
,
this
figure
plunged to around one-third. In 1995, the popularity of playing video games was nearly more than a quarter of the total,
while
no data
is
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was
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given for
this
category in 1985. Talking with friends had slightly similar proportions in the years 1985 and 1995 with 21% and 26% respectively. The category 'other made up 5% in 1985,
while
this
figure
fell to a negligible number, 2% in 1995.
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