the graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014
The graph illustrates the monthly
price
change
between the three metals namely copper, nickel, and zinc in 2014.
It started in January
, when nickel was 6%, but dropped to 1% in March,
when the number remained stable at 1% until April, but Remove the comma
apply
then
the percentage decreased drastically from May at just under 1% to minus 3% in June making it the lowest price
change
throughout the year. The proportion then
bounced back in July at -1% before leveling
off at that point for the next two months. Change the spelling
levelling
However
, it fell shortly in October at roughly minus 2%,
but increased greatly in November and Remove the comma
apply
December
at 1%.
Zinc, from January
to February, rose from 1% to 3% but then
the number fell gradually to 1%, between February and June. Furthermore
, the line pointed upward by half a percent
and the proportion did not Change the spelling
per cent
change
until September when finally
the number went back to 1% before surging to 2% at the end
of the year. Copper started at 2% in January
and showed a declining trend until June when it went up again by 1,5% and kept fluctuating until December
and ended at 1,5%
In conclusion, Nickel went from the highest in January
to becoming the lowest in December
. Zinc had the lowest price
change
in January
but became the highest in December
. Lastly
, the price
change
in copper was minor.Submitted by riani.the2 on
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