The maps below show a harbour in 2000 and how it looks today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate the transformation of Porth Harbour in its current condition and 20 years ago.
Overall
, it is evident that an additional dock was added next to the current dock on the north side of the harbour to serve more passenger ferries.
In terms of the west area of the port, the fishing boats located next to the car park on the north side were swapped with a marina. Moreover
, next to the marina between the first and second carpark, showers & toilets were added, and consequently
, the entrance gate of the car park on the south moved to the west.
Regarding the south area of the harbour, cafes and shops were constructed and located beside a lifeboat. Furthermore
, along the road on
south, there was a new conjunction that led to the hotel which used to be a castle on the edge of the south area. Change preposition
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Additionally
, the access to the beach today is only for the visitors of the hotel.Submitted by ru.kabiru.biru on
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