The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparision where relevant.

The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012. 

summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparision where relevant.
The given line chart displays the
percentage
of unemployment in both rural and urban areas in Australia for four quarters of 2012.
Overall
, with a quick glance at the chart, we can see the proportion of unemployed
people
in rural areas was higher than in urban in all four quarters
while
at the end
of the fourth
quarter
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quarter,
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both of them ( urban and rural) had approximately the same
percentage
. In the first
quarter
, urban individuals experienced the minimum
percentage
of non-working at the beginning of
this
period. The
portion
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proportion
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of
people
who had no job increased in the second
quarter
and touched about 4%, but it decreased again during the third
quarter
and experienced almost 2% as well at the beginning of the first
quarter
. In the end, the
percentage
of unemployed
people
increased dramatically and reached the highest
percentage
in 2012 by about 5%.
On the other hand
, rural individuals experienced a downward trend during 2012 with the maximum decline during the second
quarter
when the
percentage
of unemployed
people
touched the minimum
percentage
of about 4%. After that, the graph shows fluctuation changes by ending almost 5% in the fourth
quarter
.
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