The chart shows the results of surveys in one African country asking teenagers the main reasons for using their phones between 2016 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
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The chart
illustrate
the Change the verb form
illustrates
result
of the questionnaire for young people, to say the main reasons for using their phones between 2016 and 2019 in Africa.
In general, the most Fix the agreement mistake
results
reason
to use the Correct word choice
common reason
phone
it
was for social networks, let's begin by looking at 2016, Correct pronoun usage
apply
around
50% of teenagers Rephrase
where around
using
their phones Wrong verb form
used
in
socialize, next in 2017, Change preposition
to
see
a slight dip to 28% in the same category, in 2018 see a slight up again to over half, in 2019 we notice a credible increase to 56%.
The second reason Verb problem
it saw
to
using Change preposition
for
phone
is for email, and the ratio for all four years Fix the agreement mistake
phones
it
is similar, it was between 25% in 2016 and 19% in 2019.
The remaining reasons it was for digital camera and Correct pronoun usage
apply
phone
calls, in 2017 and
2017 15% of Correct word choice
apply
teenager
Fix the agreement mistake
teenagers
using
phones to take photos by digital camera, and 18% of them in 2018 and 20% of them in 2019.
In the end, the Wrong verb form
used
phone
calls are the
less, around 10% Correct article usage
apply
in
the Change preposition
at
beggining
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beginning
the
period to 5% for the end of Change preposition
of the
period
.Add an article
the period
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words phone with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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