Task 1 The diagram details the process by which carbonated drinks are produced. Summarise the information by selecting the main features and make comparisions where relevant.
The diagram illustrates a defined procedure
of
producing carbonated beverages in a factory. Change preposition
for
Overall
, it goes through a total of 5 stages to be fully prepared and to be sold in supermarkets.
Foremost, at stage 1 purification of raw Linking Words
water
is done by passing it through a filter. Meanwhile, Use synonyms
water
Use synonyms
softner
and chemicals are added in the Correct your spelling
softener
softeners
water
. Use synonyms
Next,
it is pumped in the electric heaters where the stage 2 heating Linking Words
evapouration
and carbonation begins. The Correct your spelling
evaporation
water
is boiled and pushed through a cooling pipe in a container where carbon dioxide is Use synonyms
also
added. Linking Words
Thus
, the carbonated Linking Words
water
Use synonyms
then
moves forward through a second pipe to a huge tank where the process of the next stage starts.
Once the carbonated Linking Words
water
is collected colourants, flavours and syrup Use synonyms
is
added in it to enhance the taste of the drink. As the ingredients are well mixed, the drink is passed to a second filter to be cleaned properly for the Correct subject-verb agreement
are
last
time. Linking Words
Moreover
, the freshly filtered drink is poured into Linking Words
severeal
bottles and cans and those are tightly and safely packed in Correct your spelling
several
the
huge boxes to unload Correct article usage
apply
it
in the markets via delivery trucks.Correct pronoun usage
apply
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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