Task 1 The diagram details the process by which carbonated drinks are produced. Summarise the information by selecting the main features and make comparisions where relevant.

Task 1

The diagram details the process by which carbonated drinks are produced. 

Summarise the information by selecting the main features and make comparisions where relevant.
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The diagram illustrates a defined procedure
of
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for
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producing carbonated beverages in a factory.
Overall
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, it goes through a total of 5 stages to be fully prepared and to be sold in supermarkets. Foremost, at stage 1 purification of raw
water
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is done by passing it through a filter. Meanwhile,
water
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softner
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softener
softeners
and chemicals are added in the
water
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.
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it is pumped in the electric heaters where the stage 2 heating
evapouration
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evaporation
and carbonation begins. The
water
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is boiled and pushed through a cooling pipe in a container where carbon dioxide is
also
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added.
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, the carbonated
water
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then
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moves forward through a second pipe to a huge tank where the process of the next stage starts. Once the carbonated
water
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is collected colourants, flavours and syrup
is
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added in it to enhance the taste of the drink. As the ingredients are well mixed, the drink is passed to a second filter to be cleaned properly for the
last
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time.
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, the freshly filtered drink is poured into
severeal
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several
bottles and cans and those are tightly and safely packed in
the
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huge boxes to unload
it
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in the markets via delivery trucks.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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