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, some people argue that an
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has made
kids
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creativity
compared with the past.
While
some people say that
technology
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in
children
's creative
ideas
.
Although
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in
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an Correct the article-noun agreement
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immense benefits for
creativity
among
kids
.
One primary driving is there are several tools
by the
advancement
of
technology
such
as Google, Youtube, and Facebook. These things
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a wide range of information, which
for
children
to access and visually watch.
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crucial
ideas
, that
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to boost their creative
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. In fact,
kids
who use
technology
tend to generate faster
ideas
due to
the media they
.
Another reason is
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advancement
also
provides platforms for
children
to show their
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, which
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kids
' confidence.
expose their showcases by posting
ideas
on social media platforms, providing them to meet several mentors,
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Moreover
,
provideCorrect subject-verb agreement
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them the
to use
creativity
as a career.
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technology
advancement
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the platform to introduce themselves or
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creative products.
For instance
,
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cosmetic brand in Thailand called "Love
"
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a minor who
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own Instagram to promote
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. Now she become one of the youngest
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in Thailand.
Hence
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not only
offerCorrect subject-verb agreement
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the platforms to expose creative skills to audiences but
also
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career
advancement
.
To conclude
, some would say that
technology
limitChange the verb form
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childrenChange noun form
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creativeReplace the word
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, but
according to
the proven there are immense benefits
usingChange preposition
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technology
to improve
creativity
skillFix the agreement mistake
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among
kids
.