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The bar chart shows different methods of waste disposal in four cities: Toronto, Madrid, Kuala Lumpur and Amman. Summarize the information by describing the main features of the chart and making comparisons where appropriate.

The bar chart shows different methods of waste disposal in four cities: Toronto, Madrid, Kuala Lumpur and Amman. Summarize the information by describing the main features of the chart and making comparisons where appropriate.
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The chart represents the information about
water
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the water
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 disposal approach of
four
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 different cities namely
Toronto
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, Madrid, Kuala
Lumpur
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 and Amman. It is evident that the most used technique by all
four
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countries
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 is landfill. In
Toronto
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, 70%
water
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of water
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 disposal is done by
this
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 technique and
least
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the least
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 in Kaula
Lumpur
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that
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apply
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is 15%.
However
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, in
case
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the case
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 of
Incineration
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the Incineration
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process
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 amongst all
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countries
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countries,
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 Kaula
Lumpur
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 uses
this
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process
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upto
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up to
 55%.
Furthermore
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,
Recycling
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the Recycling
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process
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 is used moderately by all the
countries
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 except
Toronto
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. Approximately,
recycling
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the recycling
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process
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 is used only of
porportion
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proportion
 7% and highest and remains almost same in Madrid and Kuala
Lumpur
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.
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, the least used method is composition by all
four
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countries
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 is from 2%- 8%.
Overall
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, it is seen that only Madrid is significantly using all
the
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apply
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four
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 methods
are compare
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compared
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 to others.
Toronto
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 is relying
for
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on
upon
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maximum
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the maximum
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 of its water disposal
is
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apply
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with the technique Landfill.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 77%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words four, toronto, lumpur, countries, process with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • waste disposal
  • method
  • recycling
  • incineration
  • landfill
  • composting
  • comparison
  • similarity
  • difference
  • variation
  • percentage
  • bar chart
  • trend
  • dominant
  • significant
  • noteworthy
  • proportion
  • city
  • data
  • figure
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