The bar chart shows different methods of waste disposal in four cities: Toronto, Madrid, Kuala Lumpur and Amman. Summarize the information by describing the main features of the chart and making comparisons where appropriate.
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The chart represents the information about
water
disposal approach of Correct article usage
the water
four
different cities namely Toronto
, Madrid, Kuala Lumpur
and Amman.
It is evident that the most used technique by all four
countries
is landfill. In Toronto
, 70% water
disposal is done by Change preposition
of water
this
technique and least
in Kaula Correct article usage
the least
Lumpur
that
is 15%. Correct pronoun usage
apply
However
, in case
of Correct article usage
the case
Incineration
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the Incineration
process
amongst all countries
Kaula Add a comma
countries,
Lumpur
uses this
process
upto
55%.
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up to
Furthermore
, Recycling
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the Recycling
process
is used moderately by all the countries
except Toronto
. Approximately, recycling
Add an article
the recycling
process
is used only of porportion
7% and highest and remains almost same in Madrid and Kuala Correct your spelling
proportion
Lumpur
. Lastly
, the least used method is composition by all four
countries
is from 2%- 8%.
Overall
, it is seen that only Madrid is significantly using all the
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apply
four
methods are compare
to others. Wrong verb form
compared
Toronto
is relying for
Change the preposition
on
upon
maximum
of its water disposal Correct article usage
the maximum
is
with the technique Landfill.Unnecessary verb
apply
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