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the table shows the figures for imprisonment in five countries between 1930 and 1980

the table shows the figures for imprisonment in five countries between 1930 and 1980
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The column graph depicts the incarceration rates in five different countries over a span of 50 years. It is remarkable that Great Britain consistently had the lowest number of people in prison for a significant 40-year period, despite a rising trend in the prison population. During
this
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 period, Canada and the United States consistently had the highest number of individuals imprisoned. In 1980, the United States peaked at approximately 140,000 individuals,
while
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 Canada had 120,000 individuals in prison in 1930. It's worth mentioning that Great Britain maintained a significantly lower population, consistently below 80,000 from 1930 to 1980.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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