A museum near your house is looking for people to do part-time vountary/unpaid work. you would like to do some voulntary work at the museum. write a letter to the museum director to apply for voluntary work in letter. explain why you want to do voluntary work at museum. describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful give details of when you would be available for work.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter in relation to the advertisement that I saw in the newspaper asking for a volunteer to work in the museum. I am currently enrolled in the hospitality course in college. I have been given an assignment to serve the
society for free for the time period of six months.
I have Correct article usage
apply
a
experience Change the article
an
of
customer service because I Change preposition
in
had
worked in the museum Wrong verb form
have
as well as
library
for 2 years, Correct article usage
the library
thus
, I have a
excellent experience Correct article usage
apply
of
dealing with the public. Change preposition
in
Moreover
, I have a
very good memory since my childhood, Add a missing verb
had a
hence
, I could remember the details of museum artificts
quite easily.
The Correct your spelling
artefacts
contact
Correct your spelling
contract
of
Change preposition
apply
job
with the library is ending Add an article
the job
a job
this
month, therefore
, I would be available to work from the
September 1, 2024. Change the article
apply
Besides
, I donot
have classes in college for the following 4 months and I can work any time you prefer.
Correct your spelling
do not
Your
sincerely,
Navneet Kaur.Correct the word
Yours
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task achievement
In your second paragraph, specify more clearly how your customer service and memory skills would benefit the museum directly. For example, mention how they could help in guiding visitors or managing exhibits.
coherence cohesion
Make sure to use spellcheck to catch minor spelling errors such as 'vountary' instead of 'voluntary' and 'artificts' instead of 'artifacts'.
task achievement
You maintained a formal tone throughout the letter, which is suitable for this type of correspondence.
coherence cohesion
You have a clear structure, with distinct paragraphs for different ideas, making your letter easy to follow.