The map below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

The map below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
The map depicts the university sports courts from 1990 to the present day.
To begin
with, In 1990, the university's sports were simpler and less developed. There was a large grass field in the northern part,
while
two tennis courts were located to the west. The southeast corner housed a small car park, and to the east of it, an outdoor pool was positioned. Between these facilities, a small changing room, reception, and cafeteria occupied the central area. Currently, the grass field has been replaced by a basketball court, and an additional tennis court
have
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been added and moved to the west on the car park area, with four courts available.
Furthermore
, the cafeteria and reception remain the same,
while
the changing room is located above the fitness centre that was situated
instead
of the tennis court. The swimming pool has been redeveloped from outdoor to indoor in the same area.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • layout
  • facilities
  • diversified infrastructure
  • accessibility
  • expansion
  • investment
  • indoors fitness activities
  • modern health trends
  • transformation
  • commitment
  • sportsmanship
  • competitive sports culture
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