The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart informs about the percentage of British people lending donations in 1990 and 2010, categorized by
age
groups. Overall
, the chart in both years shows an increase and followed by a drop. Moreover
, there were more donators
in 1990 compared to 2010 until Correct your spelling
donors
age
50.
The fraction of British donors rose gradually up to a maximum point followed by a drop not only in 1990,
but Remove the comma
apply
also
in 2010. In 1990, the highest donators percentage was in the age
group of 36 to 50. However
, it was in the category of 51 to 65 years old, the
number of charity lenders peaked in 2010.
There were more benefactors in 1990 than Correct word choice
and the
2010
with few exceptions. From the Change preposition
in 2010
age
of 18 to 50, more donators
were present in Correct your spelling
donors
year
1990 compared to 2010. But Change the article
the year
this
pattern changed in groups older than 50 years old, whereas
there were more fractions of charity funders in 2010 than in 1990.Submitted by muhammadraditya9 on
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