It is commonly said that today's children are facing huge challenges. This essay indent to discuss the causes of these pressures and give some suggestions to solve them.

In today's world, it become usual to argue that

kids

are having wider

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challenges

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it was. In

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essay, I will discuss the reason

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these

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pressures

and promote several measurements to

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tackle

them. The biggest cause why it happening is because of the competitive era that are facing and children must be prepared to have certain skills which will help them to be the

winner

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. It pursues more

parents

to encourage their offspring to attend numerous types of courses.

As a result

, many

kids

are suffering from stress and they do not have time to enjoy their childhood phases. It can be seen easily that

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couples nowadays use to send their

kids

to other classes like sports class or language

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after formal school ended.

In addition

, people who have more skills will

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wider offers from companies in terms of work in the future than others without. To tackle that problem, both

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and

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the government

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should work together.

Parents

have to understand that their

kids

must

get

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the same proportion of burdens as their ages.

For instance

,

instead

of learning

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a whole of their days, they need

therefore

the time for

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and

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. It will give a sense of balance between study and play to children.

In addition

, the government

also

should introduce new laws which contain the limitation for enrolling

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class

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particularly

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for inhabitants

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the

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early age.

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that,

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organizations or companies must give a chance to those with

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limited knowledge. It will produce

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a feeling

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of

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not only for

parents

but

also

for

kids

. In conclusion, the main reason early age people are suffering from huge

challanges

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challenges

challenge

because

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there is a pressure from the environment to have more skills than others. To solve

this

,

parents

, government and companies should work together and give a sense of freedom

for

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kids

.