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The table shows propotion of income adults and children spent on 4 common items in the UK in 1998.

The table shows propotion of income adults and children spent on 4 common items in the UK in 1998.
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The given table compares the budgets of adults and kids spent on four common items,
such
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food
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, electronic
equipment
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,
music
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, and
videos
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 in the UK in 1998.
Overall
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, when men and women spent their highest
income
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 on
food
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,
while
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 boys and girls spent on
music
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 Regarding the adults, they spent their highest budget on
food
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 at 25
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percent
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 and the lowest on
videos
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 at 1
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percent
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,
while
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 for electronic
equipment
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 and
music
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, it was the same at 5
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percent
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.
Moreover
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, men spent their highest
income
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 on
food
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, at 39
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percent
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, and the lowest on
videos
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, at 2
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percent
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per cent
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. The
music
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 was 5
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percent
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, and the electronic
equipment
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 doubled to 10
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percent
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. Turning to women, they spent most of their
income
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 on
food
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, at 39
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percent
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per cent
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, and
the
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videos
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 and electronic
equipment
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 were almost the same, at 0.5
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percent
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per cent
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 and 1
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percent
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, respectively. Boys spent most of their money on
music
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, at 38
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percent
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, and at least some of it was on
food
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, at 9
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percent
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per cent
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. For
videos
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 and electronic
equipment
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, it was the same, with 18
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percent
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per cent
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. 40
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percent
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per cent
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 of their
income
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 was spent on
music
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, and 5
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percent
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 was on electronic
equipment
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words food, equipment, music, videos, income, percent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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