The table shows propotion of income adults and children spent on 4 common items in the UK in 1998.
The table compares four common items on which British adults and
children
spent their money in 1998.
It can be seen that adults, men, and women had fewer
interest in music and videos, but when it comes to Correct quantifier usage
less
children
, boys
, and girls
, they had the
different results on the table.
Adults, men, and women spent their budget Correct article usage
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for
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on
the
food the most, which were 25, 14, and 39 Correct article usage
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percent
, respectively. Meanwhile, they spent a little money on Change the spelling
per cent
the
videos, which were at 1, 2, and 0.5 Correct article usage
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percent
, and the electronic equipment and music were almost the same Change the spelling
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usage
, which Change the noun form
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were
from 5 to 10 Change the verb form
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percent
, respectively.
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per cent
Children
, boys
, and girls
spent their money on the
music at 39, 38, and 40 Correct article usage
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percent
, respectively. Change the spelling
per cent
Also
, they purchased a lot of electronic equipment, such
as children
at 24, boys
at 18, and girls
at 5 percent
. Change the spelling
per cent
Children
, boys
, and girls
also
showed higher interests
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interest
for
the food and videos.Change preposition
in
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