The diagrams below give information about the Azadi Tower in Tehran and an outline project to extend it underground. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown

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The two provided diagrams illustrate detailed descriptions of the Eiffel

Tower

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in France and a proposed design to be

further

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expanded below the earth's surface.

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, it can be seen that the

tower

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is located south of the river Seine in the proximity of the Ecole Militaire.

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, the projected underground expansion constitutes five stages with a glass ceiling and people may visit utilising elevators.

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, the Eiffel

Tower

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has a height of 324 meters, a total metal weight of 10,100 tonnes, and a 57m and 115m first and second platform respectively.

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, it is evidently noticed that observing platforms have a total of 1.665 steps and the below-surface structure is bound to be built under the

tower

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's foundations

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the ceiling beneath the

tower

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will be out of glass.

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, analysing the underground outline, the first floor is designed for selling tickets which

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provides access to the

tower

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. The second stage is dedicated to stores and food shops

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the third level is designated for movies and a museum.

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, the fourth and fifth levels are parking lots and

also

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citizens can use the elevator to reach their desired floor.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words tower with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "provided" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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4 paragraphs

192 words

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architectural landmark
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cultural heritage
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The diagrams below give information about the Azadi Tower in Tehran and an outline project to extend it underground. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown

Some people believe it is better to raise children in the city, while others consider the countryside to be a more suitable choice.

Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both view and give your opinion

Some people focus on news in their country, while others think it is more important to be aware of international news. Discuss both views and give your opinion.