poverty
is becoming a major problem in our
.Few
people
that most of the crime in our society is done by
poverty
.I agree with
this
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of social
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with the statement that
poverty
is the main cause of crimes.
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is because,many
people
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in a poor condition
due to
which, they are unable to achieve their physiological needs.In many countries individuals earn
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daily wages,it becomes difficult for them to
their basic needs.
For example
, a survey conducted on
poverty
has shown that
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80% of
people
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earn
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daily wages.
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of them drive rikshaws.
On the other hand
, another reason may be, the role of media. when
people
are not able to attain their needs,they often try to gain it forcefully.They indulge themselves in criminal activities like snatching
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someone for food
while
social media is the other factor that
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increasingAdd an article
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rate of crime
of
poverty
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in the drama industry.
people
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,
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.
To conclude
,
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agree with the
that
poverty
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of
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of physiological needs and the role , social media
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to enhanceChange preposition
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poverty
.