54. The table below shows the percentage of first-year students who gave very good rating to the resources provided by a college, for three courses. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

54. The table below shows the percentage of first-year students who gave very good rating to the resources provided by a college, for three courses. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The table presents data comparing the proportion of first-year
students
who provided positive reviews for several courses offered by a college.
Overall
, what stands out from the table is that the data from three courses (
commerce
,
law
, and
economics
) indicate varying levels of popularity among
students
. Looking at the details, for pre-course information,
commerce
received the highest rating at 95%,
whereas
only 59% of
economics
students
rated the pre-course information as very good.
Law
students
ranked
second,
with a familiarity rating of 72%. Examining the remaining figures,
economics
and
commerce
students
rated teaching, tutoring, and printing
resources
similarly
, with ratings of 95%, 92%, and 83% respectively for these
resources
being viewed as very effective.
In contrast
, only 70% of
law
students
expressed satisfaction with these services. Regarding other
resources
, about 80% of
commerce
and
law
students
were satisfied,
whereas
only 60% of
economics
students
were pleased with the additional
resources
.
Submitted by belmontsy01 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
Vocabulary: Replace the words students, commerce, law, economics, resources with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
What to do next:
Look at other essays: