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54. The table below shows the percentage of first-year students who gave very good rating to the resources provided by a college, for three courses. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

54. The table below shows the percentage of first-year students who gave very good rating to the resources provided by a college, for three courses. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
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The table presents data comparing the proportion of first-year
students
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 who provided positive reviews for several courses offered by a college.
Overall
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, what stands out from the table is that the data from three courses (
commerce
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,
law
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, and
economics
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) indicate varying levels of popularity among
students
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. Looking at the details, for pre-course information,
commerce
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 received the highest rating at 95%,
whereas
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 only 59% of
economics
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students
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 rated the pre-course information as very good.
Law
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students
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 ranked
second,
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with a familiarity rating of 72%. Examining the remaining figures,
economics
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 and
commerce
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students
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 rated teaching, tutoring, and printing
resources
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similarly
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, with ratings of 95%, 92%, and 83% respectively for these
resources
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 being viewed as very effective.
In contrast
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, only 70% of
law
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students
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 expressed satisfaction with these services. Regarding other
resources
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, about 80% of
commerce
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 and
law
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students
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 were satisfied,
whereas
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 only 60% of
economics
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students
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 were pleased with the additional
resources
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, commerce, law, economics, resources with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
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