The table below shows the percentage of first-year students who gave very good rating to the resources provided by a college, for three courses. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the percentage of first-year students who gave very good rating to the resources provided by a college, for three courses. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
The table provides data about the
percentage
of
resources
given by Economics, Law, and
Commerce
to first-year college
students
.
Overall
,
Commerce
students
gave the highest
percentage
to pre-course information. The lowest position was noticed in the Law course's teaching system. Looking at the details, as regards the
Commerce
courses, they revealed the maximum
percentage
in
this
table, where the introduction course and teaching course are equal to 95%. Afterwards, tutors were evaluated at 95% and the printed resource exhibited 85%. Other
resources
are valued at 81% by the
students
in
Commerce
. Turning to the remaining figures, the Economics courses showed the smallest proportion of foundation
resources
, which is 59%.
However
, teaching is considered the largest one among all other courses, rated at 95%. Tutor,
resources
(print), and other
resources
are nearly close, at 90%, 81%, and 60%. The
percentage
of first-year
students
who gave a moderate rating to other
resources
is 80%.
Whereas
, pre-course information and printed
resources
received ratings of 72% and 72%, which are almost similar. By 76%, tutor
resources
have been rated, and 62% of teaching
resources
have been given by the Law
students
.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, resources, commerce, students with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.

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