The table below shows the percentage of first-year students who gave very good rating to the resources provided by a college, for three courses. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

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The table provides data about the

percentage

resources

given by Economics, Law, and

Commerce

to first-year college

students

Overall

Commerce

students

gave the highest

percentage

to pre-course information. The lowest position was noticed in the Law course's teaching system. Looking at the details, as regards the

Commerce

courses, they revealed the maximum

percentage

this

table, where the introduction course and teaching course are equal to 95%. Afterwards, tutors were evaluated at 95% and the printed resource exhibited 85%. Other

resources

are valued at 81% by the

students

Commerce

. Turning to the remaining figures, the Economics courses showed the smallest proportion of foundation

resources

, which is 59%.

However

, teaching is considered the largest one among all other courses, rated at 95%. Tutor,

resources

(print), and other

resources

are nearly close, at 90%, 81%, and 60%. The

percentage

of first-year

students

who gave a moderate rating to other

resources

is 80%.

Whereas

, pre-course information and printed

resources

received ratings of 72% and 72%, which are almost similar. By 76%, tutor

resources

have been rated, and 62% of teaching

resources

have been given by the Law

students

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

187 words

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