The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information.
The maps below illustrate an industrial
area
in the Norbiton in present, and how will looked
like in the future. There is a small legend that Change the verb form
look
be looked
to show
information about directions, housing and factory Change the verb form
shows
area
.
Overall
, it is clearly seen that there are several social facilities will
planned Verb problem
apply
in
the future. To closer look, nowadays, there are eight factories Change preposition
for
surround
Wrong verb form
surrounding
in
a roundabout. River Change preposition
apply
separate
farmland and the town.
In the future, under the river will Replace the word
separates
became
host one housing with a long road. Wrong verb form
become
In addition
, planners will add small
roundabout too. Below Correct article usage
a small
in
the river and east Correct your spelling
is
side
of the map, there will be replaced a playforund
Correct your spelling
playground
area
and three accomadation
Correct your spelling
accommodation
area
. Noth-east Change to a plural noun
areas
side
of the big roundabout, there will added three accommadation
too. At the Correct your spelling
accommodation
and
of the roundabout, Correct your spelling
end
will
Correct article usage
a will
built
school. Add a missing verb
be built
Small
roundabout will Add an article
The small
A small
separated
two social facilities, which Change the verb form
separate
is
shops and Correct subject-verb agreement
are
medical
centre. Correct article usage
a medical
East
Correct article usage
The east
side
of the small roundabout has became
Change the verb form
become
house
for Add an article
a house
the house
medical
centre and Add an article
the medical
a medical
west
Correct article usage
the west
side
of the
Remove the article
apply
this
figure has became
Change the verb form
become
house
for shops.
Add an article
a house
the house
To sum up
, industrial
Add an article
the industrial
area
will changed into suburban
Add an article
the suburban
a suburban
area
for Norbitan citizien
, They will Correct your spelling
citizen
citizens
planned
to Change the verb form
plan
be planned
removed
factories and Change the verb
remove
will built
new social infrastructure.Wrong verb form
build
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