You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words. The chart gives information on the percentage of women going into higher education in five countries for the years 1980 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar chart indicates comprehensive information regarding the ratio of females in 5 territories who pursued their education in
35-years
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35-year
interval
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intervals
overall
perspective, it is starkly apparent that Australia had the most applicants, while
South Korea showed the least favour. Besides
, the interest in more education faced an upward trend.
Upon more rigorous scrutiny, it can be seen that the figure in both years took the same proportion for Australia with almost 60%. While
in the US the portion raised from just under 40% to almost 60%. By the same token, In the UK the ratio stood at nearly one-third then
soared to more than half.
As regards the other two nations, it can be seen that France accounted for half in 1980, however
, it rose by 5% in 2000. South Korea accounted for the fewest students in both years with a margin growth in the second year.Submitted by samirakasraee72 on
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