The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018.
The bar chart illustrates the
proportion
of weekly income that households expended in a particular country in 1968 and 2018.
Overall
, It is clear that
most of the family income was allocated for meals in 1968, Whereas
, the majority of family wages were spent on entertainment in 2018, However
, fuel and power accounted for the lowest porportion
in both years.
Focusing on more details, food dominated the highest percentage of households' weekly spending at 35% in 1968, which was double the percentage in 2018. Correct your spelling
proportion
By contrast
, leisure accounted for about 9% of households' weekly spending in 1968, while
in 2018, it was approximately double that figure,In addition
, just above 6% salaries
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of salaries
was
allocated for fuel and power and it decreased to 4% in 2018. Change the verb form
were
Futhermore
, household and goods Correct your spelling
Furthermore
were
Verb problem
had
same
data at about 7% in both years.
Correct article usage
the same
Haveing
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Having
look
at the two medium Wrong verb form
looked
proportion
of Fix the agreement mistake
proportions
families
weekly expenditure , Change noun form
families'
family's
houseing
accounted Correct your spelling
housing
10
% in 1968, less than half of the Change preposition
for 10
proportion
of the year 2018. Additionally
, below 15% wages
comprised for transport in 2018, just 7% paid Change preposition
of wages
its
in 1968. Saw remain tow lowest Correct pronoun usage
it
proportion
of familes
weekly Consumption ,Personal goods Correct your spelling
families
was
around 8% in 1968 and Change the verb form
were
ti
dropped 4% in 2018.Correct your spelling
it
Moreover
,the proportion
of clothing and footware
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footwear
were
exactly 10% and Change the verb form
was
then
it downward
to Rephrase
went down
precise
5% in 2018.Correct article usage
a precise
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