The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018.

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of weekly income that households expended in a particular country in 1968 and 2018.

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,

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most of the family income was allocated for meals in 1968,

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, the majority of family wages were spent on entertainment in 2018,

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, fuel and power accounted for the lowest

porportion

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proportion

in both years. Focusing on more details, food dominated the highest percentage of households' weekly spending at 35% in 1968, which was double the percentage in 2018.

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, leisure accounted for about 9% of households' weekly spending in 1968,

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in 2018, it was approximately double that figure，

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, just above 6%

salaries

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of salaries

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was

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were

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allocated for fuel and power and it decreased to 4% in 2018.

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, household and goods

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had

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same

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data at about 7% in both years.

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look

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looked

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at the two medium

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proportion

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proportions

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of

families

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weekly expenditure ,

houseing

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housing

accounted

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for 10

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% in 1968, less than half of the

proportion

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of the year 2018.

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, below 15%

wages

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of wages

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comprised for transport in 2018, just 7% paid

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in 1968. Saw remain tow lowest

proportion

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of

familes

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families

weekly Consumption ，Personal goods

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around 8% in 1968 and

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it

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dropped 4% in 2018.

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,the

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of clothing and

footware

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footwear

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exactly 10% and

then

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it

downward

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to

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5% in 2018.