Some individuals say that the main environmental issue of our time is the loss of particular types of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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the

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of flora and fauna is the main ecological

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others say that we have more crucial problems in the environment.

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the

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of individual species can lead to

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shortage of food, I believe that it is better to solve other problems

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as water

pollution

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. On the one hand, the

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of special plants and animals is an important

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because it can lead to food

shortage

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. People are used to eating meat, drinking milk and using the wool of several types of domestic animals,

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the

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of one of them will be a colossal

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for humans.

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, if one day all horses disappear from the face of the earth, it will be an enormous

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for nations

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as Kazakhstan and Kyrgyzstan because they use horses for

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the national games,

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food,

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clothes and

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their milk for the drink.

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, nowadays water

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is the key complication in many countries. Because of the large amount of

garbage

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there is not enough land to throw them away, so they throw the garbage to the bottom of the oceans.

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the research of scientists, more than 40 per cent of the world’s oceans are considered by

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pollution

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. In conclusion,

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it is a difficult situation in biodiversity, there are ample more important problems in our time. In my point of view, for

people

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water

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is the main

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now.