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The table and pie charts below show the number of research students in Australian universities in 2001 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The table and pie charts below show the number of research students in Australian universities in 2001 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The given chart illustrates information about
quantity
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the quantity
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 of academic
researchers
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 in Australian universities
since
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 2001 to 2010.
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,
according to
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 the illustration, there are 2 groups of research students, local and international. It is noticeable that in the period of 9 years, the amount of students has
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almost
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 with, in 2001 the number of local
researchers
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 accounted for almost 90% of the total, which was 33,357.
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,
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 figure
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 international students was only 5,192. The total of 2001 counting the amount of local and international
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, was 38,849. Turning to 2010, it is conspicuous that
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the quatity
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quatity
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quantity
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 of locals grew and the number of them was 39,488. Compared to the
quantity
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 of international
researchers
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 over a period of 9 years,
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 figure experienced a nearly threefold increase, reaching 14,593. The aggregate student population in 2010 significantly exceeded the 2001 figure, culminating in a total of 54,081.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words researchers with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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