The graphs of the plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs of the plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.

 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two plans given illustrate the place of an
airport
currently and how it will be after being redeveloped in the next year.
Overall
, it is evident that the current location of
this
airport
will witness major changes over the following year.
Firstly
, gate numbers will be almost doubled , reaching a total number of 18.
Besides
, the current gates are repositioned to north east side of the
airport
, making up room for other gates to be built.
Secondly
, spare doors to both departures and arrivals sectors are added , counting 2 doors for each section.
Nonetheless
, the walkaway path will be eliminated and a sky train will be built
instead
, connecting north to the centre of the
airport
.
Nevertheless
, the check-in desk will be moved to where the current café is , to be more convenient for people to access whilst being replaced by a bag drop section , putting the café to the southeast corner of the departure gate.
Moreover
, shops are constructed after the security passport control , which can
also
be accessed using the gates. Regarding the arrivals sector, another café alongside an ATM and
also
a car hire will be built, concluding the construction plan.
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