The charts below show what Uk graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.
The bar graphs compare how many UK
students
worked at a part-time job, volunteed
or continued their studies or even could not find a job after they graduated and postgraduated in 2008.
In general, the total amount of people who Correct your spelling
volunteer
volunteered
further
studied after their
college was the highest point. Correct pronoun usage
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In addition
, after graduation and postgraduation, students
who worked voluntarily accounted for the lowest number.
It is clearly seen that the number of further
study students
was nearly ten times as many as voluntary work students
, at approximately 30000 and 3500 people for graduated high schools, and at around 2700 and 345 students
for graduated colleges respectively. Moreover
, the proportion of unemployment compared with other categories of students
, excluding full-time work, was nearly the same for both destination UK students
after leaving college.
By contrast
, after high school, part-time students
were
roughly similar unemployment, Verb problem
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stood
at around 17735 and 16000 individuals respectively. Wrong verb form
standing
While
with postgraduated students
, they were above 2500 students
, nearly twice as high as unemployed students
, at around 1600 people in the same year.Submitted by duyuyen18 on
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