The line graph below shows the average monthly temperatures in three major cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph above depicts information about the average per
month
temperatures
in celcius
in three various cities. Correct your spelling
Celsius
Along
the Change preposition
During
year
, Paris and Dubai tend to increase in temperature in the
half Correct article usage
apply
year
. Correct article usage
a year
On the other hand
, Sydney had different
trend which the Correct article usage
a different
city
decrease in temperature in Change noun form
city's
the
half Correct article usage
apply
year
.
In January, Paris Correct article usage
a year
compares
to other cities, Wrong verb form
compared
become
the most cold Wrong verb form
became
city
in the first month
which was 5 degrees
celcius
. The Correct your spelling
celsius
degrees
up
constantly until Add a missing verb
are up
reach
the peak in July and August at 20 Change the verb form
reaching
degrees
celcius
. After that, the Correct your spelling
celsius
temperatures
downward continuously until end
of the Add an article
the end
year
.
In another city
, Dubai begin
Change the verb form
begins
with
19 Change preposition
at
degrees
celcius
in January. Similar Correct your spelling
celsius
like
Paris, the Change preposition
to
city
showed upward
Correct article usage
an upward
constantly's
trend until hit Change the word
constant's
the
peak at 36 Change the word
its
degrees
celcius
in August. Correct your spelling
celsius
Then
, slump
significantly until Wrong verb form
slumped
end
of the Add an article
the end
year
to 21 degrees
celcius
.
Correct your spelling
celsius
Last
Change the article
The last
city
, Sydney had 24 degrees
celcius
in January. Correct your spelling
celsius
Afterward
, the Change the spelling
Afterwards
temperatures
decrease from month
to month
until hit the bottom at 13 degrees
celcius
in August. Later on, the Correct your spelling
celsius
temperatures
increased again.Submitted by wishmeluck on
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words month, temperatures, celcius, year, city, degrees with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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