Some people believe that individuals cannot improve the environment, but only governments and big companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people feel that only the governments and multinational companies could make the development of the

environment

.

However

,

individuals

could not give the difference about that. I personally do not entirely accept

this

and will explain why in

this

essay. On the one hand, I believe that

the

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governments and multinational companies can be

a

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decision

maker

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makers

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for making

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the evironmeny

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evironmeny

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environment

better.

Besides

, they have networking to make some projects about improving the

environment

.

For instance

, they can build the building with eco-friendly

with

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investor

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investors

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from other countries.

Furthermore

, they have sophisticated

machine

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machines

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for cleaning the river.

Hence

, they have some projects that can be beneficial for the

environment

.

On the other hand

, I believe

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individuals

have to make

first

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the first

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moving

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move

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to make a difference.

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,

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the Pandawara

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Pandawara

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Pandora

group begins

from

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with

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the

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one person

that

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who

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clean

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cleans

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the river using

simple

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a simple

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tool

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tools

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and

traditional

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traditions

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.

However

,

this

movement

make

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makes

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other people join

this

trend by cleaning

river

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rivers

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near their

house

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houses

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. It can be seen that the influence

from

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of

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social media is highly recommended.

Moreover

,

this

trend become gathering activist to improve their

environment

.

Therefore

, the

individuals

can be a solid group that can create

tha

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the

transformation for

environment

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the environment

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.

To sum up

, I feel that

individuals

can be a community that

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is concern

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concern

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concerned

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about the

environment

and create some

activity

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activities

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for enhancing

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to enhance

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the

environment

.