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In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadaysthan in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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Nowadays, many individuals prefer to live alone than in the past which
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 positive development and the reasons will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs. One major reason people prefer to live alone is the autonomy and freedom it brings. They have full liberty to make personal choices regarding their lifestyle, daily
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routines
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 and living environment
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 needing to compromise with any partner or family member.
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 well-being and development. To exemplify, nowadays many people go to other countries for higher study and job and manage their everything alone which helps them to make independent.
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 people to develop essential skills
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 as cooking, budgeting, and home maintenance which are valuable and help in future as well.
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introduction
Ensure that your introduction clearly states your opinion and outlines the main points you will discuss in the essay. This helps set a clear direction from the beginning.
supported main points
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introduction conclusion present
Conclude your essay with a clear summary of your main points and restate your opinion in a concise manner.
clear comprehensive ideas
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relevant specific examples
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complete response
You have a clear understanding of the topic and your opinion is evident.
logical structure
The essay demonstrates good coherence with ideas logically flowing from one to another.
clear comprehensive ideas
Your essay shows an understanding of the essential skills developed by those living alone.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • financial independence
  • single-person household
  • personal success
  • economic stability
  • freedom and autonomy
  • personal choices
  • social support
  • mental health
  • emotional drawbacks
  • personal growth
  • self-sufficiency
  • life skills
  • sense of personal accomplishment
  • mental well-being
  • shared environment
  • financial stress
  • standard of living
  • cost-sharing
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