The diagram below shows how drinking water is made using solar power. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The diagram below shows how drinking water is made using solar power. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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The diagram illustrates the process of how making
water
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to drink with powdered pumps and filters from solar power. In general,
that is
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a largely mechanical process including several steps, beginning with collecting sunlight and ending with storing
water
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. Having looked at the given picture for more details,
firstly
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, the solar panel collects the sunlight from the sun and converts it into energy.
This
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energy will
then
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be transferred to the converter where the energy is converted into electricity.
Thirdly
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, the electricity is delivered to the pump putting an underground well to handle the liquid. The process continues with the treated aqua being transported through the long pipe to the
water
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tank put on a wooden platform.
Next,
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the first
water
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in the
water
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tank is treated into clean
water
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.
Then
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, the filtered liquid is transferred through the small pipe and a tap is opened to follow the drinking
water
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into the moveable container.
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