The chart below shows the number of adults participating in different major sports in one area, in 1997 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart indicates the comparison number of adults joining different types of
the
sports in one Correct article usage
apply
regional
between 1997 and 2017. Replace the word
region
In
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Overall
overall
, there were increased trends in most of the sports, exception
Cricket and Swimming.
The most significant Replace the word
except
increasement
is basketball, it has raised more than double, from 9 Correct your spelling
increase
thousands
Change to singular
thousand
people
in 1997 to around 22 thousand in 2017. Whereas
, there was shapely
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a shapely
descreased
in cricket that was about 26 Thousand Correct your spelling
decrease
people
in 1997, and only about 8 thousand in the later year 2017.
Also
, we can see from the chart that number of people
participated in swimming was the same between 1997 and 2017. Other popular sports which are tennis, football and rugby have been
increased between Unnecessary verb
apply
two year
Add a hyphen
two-year
milstones
. Particularly, we Correct your spelling
milestones
milestone
can
know that Football and Rugby Verb problem
apply
are
quite similar numbers of Verb problem
have
people
to take-part
Correct your spelling
part
in
, about 31 and 49Change preposition
apply
thousands
in the Change to singular
thousand
year
1997 and 2017 respectively.Fix the agreement mistake
years
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