The graph below shows the number of tourists visting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant.
The line graph illustrates the figures
of
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for
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tourists visiting a specific Caribbean
island
,
among
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between
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the years 2010 and 2017. By looking at the data presented, in 2017, the total and visitors who stayed on
cruise
ships
were
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was
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the highest in those years.
In contrast
, in 2010, only the total was the lowest between them. By 2010,
according to
the data presented, visitors who stayed on
cruise
ships
, and people who stayed on the
island
were around 0.25
million
, and nearly 0.75
million
, respectively.
Moreover
, in 2011, the total was 1.25
million
, for more details, those who were on
cruise
ships
were not quite as high as people who stayed on the
island
, with 0.75 and 0.5
million
, in order.
However
, From 2012-2015, those who settled on
cruise
ships
were continuously increasing,
whereas
, individuals who stayed on the
island
decreased, until 2016, they came back increasing. In summary,
it is clear that
the total was steadily increasing.
On the contrary
, visitors who stayed on the
cruise
, and who settled on the
island
fluctuated.
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