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The graph below shows the number of tourists visting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant.
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The line graph illustrates the figures
of
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 tourists visiting a specific Caribbean
island
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,
among
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between
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 the years 2010 and 2017. By looking at the data presented, in 2017, the total and visitors who stayed on
cruise
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ships
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were
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was
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 the highest in those years.
In contrast
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, in 2010, only the total was the lowest between them. By 2010,
according to
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 the data presented, visitors who stayed on
cruise
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ships
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, and people who stayed on the
island
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 were around 0.25
million
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, and nearly 0.75
million
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, respectively.
Moreover
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, in 2011, the total was 1.25
million
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, for more details, those who were on
cruise
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ships
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 were not quite as high as people who stayed on the
island
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, with 0.75 and 0.5
million
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, in order.
However
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, From 2012-2015, those who settled on
cruise
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ships
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 were continuously increasing,
whereas
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, individuals who stayed on the
island
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 decreased, until 2016, they came back increasing. In summary,
it is clear that
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 the total was steadily increasing.
On the contrary
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, visitors who stayed on the
cruise
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, and who settled on the
island
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 fluctuated.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words island, cruise, ships, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "presented" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 6 times.
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