The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graphics illustrate the process for the production of
the
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electricity
in a hydroelectric
power
station starting at the river and ending
of
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the national grid.
Overall
,
it is clear that
producing
electricity
for individual consumption goes through a complicated process, which involves around
of
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8 stages and these stages are divided into 2 parts: the day
part
and the night
part
. At the beginning of the day
part
,
water
through the river into the high-level reservoir which was blocked by the dam and it will open a conduit in the daytime.
Then
the
water
will be delivered to the
power
station, before it into the reversible turbines
whereas
operate
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generator
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a generator
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, the
electricity
will be generated flow of the
water
during the
senting
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sending
sensing
. After that, the
electricity
will be collected in
generator
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and
then
, through the
power
lines, the national grid will have energy to use. Turning now to the night
part
,
water
from the city waste will be placed in the low-level reservoir and
also
sent to the
power
station through the conduit into the reversible turbines. The machine will pump
water
into a high-level reservoir
while
the dam will close
in
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the
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night.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, power, part, water with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • hydroelectric power station
  • reservoir
  • potential energy
  • mechanical energy
  • electrical energy
  • turbine
  • generator
  • renewable energy
  • fossil fuels
  • emissions
  • power lines
  • gate-controlled tunnels
  • gravity-driven
  • transformation
  • clean energy source
  • sustainable
  • recycled water
  • mountainous area
  • activate
  • transmit
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