The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's corree and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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percentage
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the masses
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coffee
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tea
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sydney
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Sydney
while
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customers
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Sydney
melbourne
.
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Brisban,
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of people
coffee
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the masses
instant
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cafe
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in same cities.Submitted by kulveerdhaliwal501 on
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