The graph below shows the proportion of four different material that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the proportion of four different material that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided linear chart
illustrate
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illustrates
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information about
numbers
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the numbers
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of four types of different
material
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materials
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which were recycled
during
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from
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1982 to 2010.
Overall
,it can be noticed that less amount of plastic material
recycled
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was recycled
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while
the proportion of paper and cardboard was higher
which
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apply
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recycled between the period of 1982 to 2010
To begin
with,there was
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a flactuation
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flactuation
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fluctuation
in the figure
of
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for
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paper and cardboard which
recycled
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was recycled
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that was around 65
percent
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per cent
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in
first
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a first
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given year it increased
with
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to
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10% in 1986
then
fall
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down after 4 years
ang
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and
again up reached at 80
pecent
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per cent
in 1994 before
fall
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falling
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down at 70
percent
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per cent
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in
last
given year.There was
small
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a small
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increase in
percentage
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the percentage
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of plastic
recycle
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recycled
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material
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materials
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whinch
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which
start
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started
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waith
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at
around 5% in 1982 and
near
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nearly
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tenth in
last
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the last
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given period.The proportion of
alumininium
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aluminium
was almost 1
pecentile
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percentile
in starting year which rose
up
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significantly and reached
at
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25% in 2002 which was
near
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nearly
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half in 2010.
Furthermore
,
Glass
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the Glass
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container figure was half in 1982
which
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when
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recycled
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was recycled
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which decreased
with
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by
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ten
pecent
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per cent
in
next
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the next
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8 years and again
reach
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reached
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at
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apply
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the same proportion
1994.60
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in 1994.60
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%
glass
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of glass
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container
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containers
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recycled
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were recycled
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in
last
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the last
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givrn
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given
years.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.

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